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EPISODE 1

'Eve! Where are you?'

'No..no..don't leave me here...'

Fir mumbled in her dream. Fir, is a perfectly normal person, sometimes a little bit silly, funny girl.

'Fir! What are you doing? Do you dare to risk some extra homeworks?' screamed a short, plumb woman beside Fir.

She, Professor Pomprey would never had anyone sleeping in her class. And Fir is the first one, that ever dare to risk it. But, that girl that was screamed by Professor Pomprey, seems do not be disturb at all and all people know, Professor Pomprey's sound is the second loudest in that school. And who had the loudest sound is the little girl, Ally who is also Fir best friend. And now, she looked at Professor Pomprey with such an innocent look, that would make every people fell into it. But anyway, this did not include Professor Pomprey. She already had too much of that to fell into that innocent look.

'Now, Ally... Don't start that again. I had enough of that this semester.' Professor Pomprey glare at Ally suspiciously and ready to dart away if she open her mouth.

'No, professor, i don't mean to do that again. I...I just want you to let go Fir. If not, maybe i would start in a second.' Ally replied with that innocent look again.

'Haih...' sighed Professor Pomprey. She had to let off Fir, just because...because Ally's threat to open her mouth.

Now, let me introduce:
> Fir
- a girl, sometimes silly, funny...
- had a mysterious family background
- had magic...even though she don't know herself
- a clever girl
- a genius in inventing new tricks

>Ally
- Fir's best friend
- also had magic but don't know anything about it
- has a loud voice that everyone scared when she screamed...
- clever in making innocent faces
- making use of Fir tricks frequently..

>Professor Pomprey
- doesn't know anything about Fir's cleverness
- think that Fir and Ally are silly little girl
- has the second loudest voice( the loudest is Ally)
- scared of Ally loud voice

TO BE CONTINUED____________________________

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